Former Student Work!
Hi there! Today we're looking at past students work and I'll be reviewing them! :D https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bJ7L6NoW98c ^^ First video! To start, I feel the police car in the beginning was a good touch to establish the scene. However, I feel they should have added a police car siren, which would have added so much more to the establishing part of the scene. The boom shot with the title sequence was a great touch. After the title sequence, the music just cut, it felt very choppy and unexpected, I feel they should have faded the music out. I think they should have focused more on the book with the girls information. The zoom in was okay, they should have instead cut and used a mediums shot to get the girl talking. Again, they should pay more attention to the books then cut to the suspect. The plot is good and I would watch this movie for sure if I saw the opener, I just think the types of camera shots did not feel right. It felt too shaky. https://w...